Post by Ninetales on May 15, 2007 17:48:37 GMT -5
Okay, this is my first, I mean, very first fanfic... so it might start out rocky, but it ends better, in grammer, spelling, and plot development and story structure.
Okay, a few rules before I begin... if you want to review, please send me a PM, it will keep this thread clean... and also, allow me to answer questions that you might have faster and easier then in a thread like this. Thank you that is all.
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The Trainer of
It was one of the most beautiful sunsets that Matthew Brown had ever seen. With their vibrant colors of reds, oranges, along with the darkening color of clouds that are turning from pink to black. This has been a tradition of his to see the sunrise and set as much as possible. When from behind him, his younger brother came running up, out of breath from running all the way from their campsite. Soon he straitens his back and as soon as he regained his breath he says.
“Matt dinner is ready and mom and dad want to talk to you before you leave tomorrow on your pokemon journey.” Matt turned and replied with the tone of that of an annoyed older brother
“Thank you Ethan I will be down as soon as the sun is done setting you know that I don’t like being interrupted as it sets. Also tell them I found some very good fire wood for tonight, we won’t have any troubles tonight from any insects. I can finally go on my journey after waiting more then 6 years I can go.’ Matt said this last part with a slight raise in his voice of excitement.
“Okay I’ll tell them, and don’t be late; you know how mom is about time.” Ethan replied back in a tone of voice that had a joking demeanor behind it.
“Yes Ethan I know that, seeing how she gets even more worried when ever we go camping. Come on, dad’s Arcanine will protect the camp and wild pokemon usually stay away from this path anyway.”
“True brother, that is oh so true.” Ethan replied with a laugh
With that he takes off again running back down the hill before Matthew could tell him to enjoy the walk down the hill.
Matthew was then about to pick up his bundle of sticks when he heard a women scream.
“Put it out. Put It out NOW!” the female screeched out in a high pitch voice that made Matthew cringes at the volume of the noise
Voice number two, which sounded like a man. “I would if you would stop running around your only feeding it”
Before Matthew could make out any more words he was tackled blindly by a small brown furry animal which in a second he realized was a Vulpix. He then saw something that made him shudder out of fear. The Vulpix was badly poisoned. So without a thought of his action or what could happen as such, he takes off his windbreaker and wrapped him up in it hoping that he wouldn’t frighten the poor thing. But as he took off running he heard two voices behind him thinking them where rangers, so he slows down ready to give the Vulpix to the proper authority.
Voice one “put that Vulpix down, now.”
Voice Two “Yeah we weakened it so we could capture it we won’t like it being taken from us.”
Matt skirted to a halt and turned around to face his challengers and saw a female with what was long hair now burned to a short length and a man with a 5 o’clock shadow wearing the tall tell uniform of Team Rocket Black pants and shirt with a red R in front.
Female: “Now that we have your attention. Prepare for a fight”
Male: “and be ready for twice the light
Female: “to steal all your valued pokemon”
Male: “leaving you only none”
Female “Violet”
Male: “Garth”
But before they could finish a pidgey Squawked “enough you fools he getting away”
Garth and Violet: “you won’t get away that easy”
Violet: “Beedrill go”
Garth: “Raticate I need you”
With that the tall tell sounds and lights appeared releasing the two said pokemon
Violet: “Beedrill you know what to do to the trainer and when you’re done bring the Vulpix back to me.”
“Bee Beedrill” with that the bee pokemon took off about ready to fight only to find itself colliding with a tree branch for matt had put the vulpix down on the ground and had taken a defensive spot over the poor guy, he also was holding one of the branches that he was taking for fire wood to use later that night and swinging it around as he was yelling at the two rocket grunts
“Leave this poor Vulpix alone and also you will not get away with this, the rangers will be on their way.” Matthew was readying the tree branch as if he was a baseball player ready to hit the ball thrown at him.
But this attack and challenged from the young boy only infuriated the Beedrill to launce a bunch of twin needle attack hitting Matt badly but still he was stand even though he showed signs that he was poisoned. Garth seeing this ordered his raticate to rush in to grab the vulpix in its jaws only to be hit in the face with the tree branch. Just as matt fell to one knee a howl was heard and a Ninetales jumped unto the scene sending a very powerful fire spin attack sending the Rocket grunts into the Air
All: “we will get you for this for getting in are way someday you will pay.” and then they twinkled like Jessie and James. And when the Ninetales looked back it gasped because the human had lost conciseness because of the poison.
(A/n) I will translate now so you can hear the conversation going on.
Ninetales: “son get those berry’s that are over by the path over there
Vulpix: “yes mother”
Ninetales: “Matt also can you get some herbs he’ll need all the help he can get especially since he saved you from those ruffians”
Matt: “ok I hope they look for him soon because I don’t think he’ll last long like this.”
Ninetales: “true but don’t worry Mothers instincts will tell his mom something is wrong”
At that moment as they were talking and administering the berries and herbs voices were heard yelling “MATT... MATT CAN YOU HEAR ME.” At that moment the search party came to the clearing that the battle took place to see a Ninetales and vulpix giving matt berry’s to help stop the poisoning and also starting a small fire using the wood that matt had collected. The ranger seeing that he was stable after checking vitals decide to take Matthew back to the first aid station for him to finish recovering and to question him on what happened.
Meanwhile a mile away the trio of thieves where calling their boss Giovanni in a abandoned gas station
“Boss we fond the perfect vulpix to try the experiment but theirs a slight problem”
“WHAT! You said that you could do this operation. Ha. You call yourself Grunts unless you get that vulpix back I don’t want you to come to any base until you do. Understand?”
The two just nod and said in unison “Yes sir.” Then the screen goes black
Violet “now what Garth we can’t go back you saw that party of rangers from the air?”
“Yes violet I saw so we just wait until things cool down then we take all of that kid’s pokemon.”
“Don’t you two forget that...” at this a metal color fell off the neck of the pidgey and it started speaking pokemon
“Fred your translator fell off” at this violet bent down and picked it up and put it back on
“Thanks I need that to help plan” with that the trio started planning into the night and morning
Dawn was, well dawning onto the first aid station and matt was wide awake telling about his encounter with team rocket
The ranger after he heard the entire story was appalled “they were planning to attack you matt?” at this for the umpteenth time the Vulpix perked up then seeing that it didn’t involve him still just put his head back down while watching from outside underneath the window. Then out of the woods came out another vulpix
“There you are matt I was looking all over for you.”
“Firestorm” matt then jumps up and runs over and tackles her playfully
“That’s it you ask for it Matt” at this the two started to wrestle like most young Vulpix’s to gain experience but don’t faint each other.
Meanwhile Matthew hearing the commotion outside walks slowly over seeing the two Vulpixs wrestling and chasing each other he starts to chuckle to himself.
Okay, a few rules before I begin... if you want to review, please send me a PM, it will keep this thread clean... and also, allow me to answer questions that you might have faster and easier then in a thread like this. Thank you that is all.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
The Trainer of
It was one of the most beautiful sunsets that Matthew Brown had ever seen. With their vibrant colors of reds, oranges, along with the darkening color of clouds that are turning from pink to black. This has been a tradition of his to see the sunrise and set as much as possible. When from behind him, his younger brother came running up, out of breath from running all the way from their campsite. Soon he straitens his back and as soon as he regained his breath he says.
“Matt dinner is ready and mom and dad want to talk to you before you leave tomorrow on your pokemon journey.” Matt turned and replied with the tone of that of an annoyed older brother
“Thank you Ethan I will be down as soon as the sun is done setting you know that I don’t like being interrupted as it sets. Also tell them I found some very good fire wood for tonight, we won’t have any troubles tonight from any insects. I can finally go on my journey after waiting more then 6 years I can go.’ Matt said this last part with a slight raise in his voice of excitement.
“Okay I’ll tell them, and don’t be late; you know how mom is about time.” Ethan replied back in a tone of voice that had a joking demeanor behind it.
“Yes Ethan I know that, seeing how she gets even more worried when ever we go camping. Come on, dad’s Arcanine will protect the camp and wild pokemon usually stay away from this path anyway.”
“True brother, that is oh so true.” Ethan replied with a laugh
With that he takes off again running back down the hill before Matthew could tell him to enjoy the walk down the hill.
Matthew was then about to pick up his bundle of sticks when he heard a women scream.
“Put it out. Put It out NOW!” the female screeched out in a high pitch voice that made Matthew cringes at the volume of the noise
Voice number two, which sounded like a man. “I would if you would stop running around your only feeding it”
Before Matthew could make out any more words he was tackled blindly by a small brown furry animal which in a second he realized was a Vulpix. He then saw something that made him shudder out of fear. The Vulpix was badly poisoned. So without a thought of his action or what could happen as such, he takes off his windbreaker and wrapped him up in it hoping that he wouldn’t frighten the poor thing. But as he took off running he heard two voices behind him thinking them where rangers, so he slows down ready to give the Vulpix to the proper authority.
Voice one “put that Vulpix down, now.”
Voice Two “Yeah we weakened it so we could capture it we won’t like it being taken from us.”
Matt skirted to a halt and turned around to face his challengers and saw a female with what was long hair now burned to a short length and a man with a 5 o’clock shadow wearing the tall tell uniform of Team Rocket Black pants and shirt with a red R in front.
Female: “Now that we have your attention. Prepare for a fight”
Male: “and be ready for twice the light
Female: “to steal all your valued pokemon”
Male: “leaving you only none”
Female “Violet”
Male: “Garth”
But before they could finish a pidgey Squawked “enough you fools he getting away”
Garth and Violet: “you won’t get away that easy”
Violet: “Beedrill go”
Garth: “Raticate I need you”
With that the tall tell sounds and lights appeared releasing the two said pokemon
Violet: “Beedrill you know what to do to the trainer and when you’re done bring the Vulpix back to me.”
“Bee Beedrill” with that the bee pokemon took off about ready to fight only to find itself colliding with a tree branch for matt had put the vulpix down on the ground and had taken a defensive spot over the poor guy, he also was holding one of the branches that he was taking for fire wood to use later that night and swinging it around as he was yelling at the two rocket grunts
“Leave this poor Vulpix alone and also you will not get away with this, the rangers will be on their way.” Matthew was readying the tree branch as if he was a baseball player ready to hit the ball thrown at him.
But this attack and challenged from the young boy only infuriated the Beedrill to launce a bunch of twin needle attack hitting Matt badly but still he was stand even though he showed signs that he was poisoned. Garth seeing this ordered his raticate to rush in to grab the vulpix in its jaws only to be hit in the face with the tree branch. Just as matt fell to one knee a howl was heard and a Ninetales jumped unto the scene sending a very powerful fire spin attack sending the Rocket grunts into the Air
All: “we will get you for this for getting in are way someday you will pay.” and then they twinkled like Jessie and James. And when the Ninetales looked back it gasped because the human had lost conciseness because of the poison.
(A/n) I will translate now so you can hear the conversation going on.
Ninetales: “son get those berry’s that are over by the path over there
Vulpix: “yes mother”
Ninetales: “Matt also can you get some herbs he’ll need all the help he can get especially since he saved you from those ruffians”
Matt: “ok I hope they look for him soon because I don’t think he’ll last long like this.”
Ninetales: “true but don’t worry Mothers instincts will tell his mom something is wrong”
At that moment as they were talking and administering the berries and herbs voices were heard yelling “MATT... MATT CAN YOU HEAR ME.” At that moment the search party came to the clearing that the battle took place to see a Ninetales and vulpix giving matt berry’s to help stop the poisoning and also starting a small fire using the wood that matt had collected. The ranger seeing that he was stable after checking vitals decide to take Matthew back to the first aid station for him to finish recovering and to question him on what happened.
Meanwhile a mile away the trio of thieves where calling their boss Giovanni in a abandoned gas station
“Boss we fond the perfect vulpix to try the experiment but theirs a slight problem”
“WHAT! You said that you could do this operation. Ha. You call yourself Grunts unless you get that vulpix back I don’t want you to come to any base until you do. Understand?”
The two just nod and said in unison “Yes sir.” Then the screen goes black
Violet “now what Garth we can’t go back you saw that party of rangers from the air?”
“Yes violet I saw so we just wait until things cool down then we take all of that kid’s pokemon.”
“Don’t you two forget that...” at this a metal color fell off the neck of the pidgey and it started speaking pokemon
“Fred your translator fell off” at this violet bent down and picked it up and put it back on
“Thanks I need that to help plan” with that the trio started planning into the night and morning
Dawn was, well dawning onto the first aid station and matt was wide awake telling about his encounter with team rocket
The ranger after he heard the entire story was appalled “they were planning to attack you matt?” at this for the umpteenth time the Vulpix perked up then seeing that it didn’t involve him still just put his head back down while watching from outside underneath the window. Then out of the woods came out another vulpix
“There you are matt I was looking all over for you.”
“Firestorm” matt then jumps up and runs over and tackles her playfully
“That’s it you ask for it Matt” at this the two started to wrestle like most young Vulpix’s to gain experience but don’t faint each other.
Meanwhile Matthew hearing the commotion outside walks slowly over seeing the two Vulpixs wrestling and chasing each other he starts to chuckle to himself.