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Post by Bloom Sapphire on Mar 14, 2007 17:02:20 GMT -5
diana rushed as fast as lightning."i see the lab!"squeeeeeeellllllll!
she runs up and knocks on the door.
my group 1 starter:Electrike
my pokedex color:blue
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Post by Nyaa-Neko on Mar 14, 2007 17:09:55 GMT -5
Professor Cherry opened the door, and noticed the girl standing there. "Hello, there," he greeted calmly. "You must be the new trainer who came in today." The elderly man quickly beckoned the girl inside, closing the door behind her with a bang. Inside the building was the main room of the lab, or at least, the only part anyone but he and his colleagues ever saw. Aside from the tangled mass of wires, computers, and cluttered tables, there sat a large, furnished cage in the middle of the room. Inside were two writhing purple forms, the two ekans the professor regretted to call his own. There was also a large map of Jenta plastered crookedly over one wall, and many fliers with the starter list were hung on various parts of the room. The professor stared at the girl. "Well, you're here for your starter set, right?" Without waiting for her to answer, he waved his hand to excuse the thought. "Of course you are, you wouldn't be here if it weren't for that, eh? Now then, now then," the man brushed back his frizzy grey hair, and stepped over to a table. His rough hands clasped around a few papers, which he then shoved into Diana's hands. "Here's a flier on the group system - make sure you read it, since I don't feel like explaining it. Another is the list of Group 1 starters we offer here. Read that, too - I rarely give out Group 1 starters that aren't on the list." ((The "flier" on the group system: banette.proboards51.com/index.cgi?board=rules&action=display&thread=1172265494The "flier" of the Group 1 starters: banette.proboards51.com/index.cgi?board=getyourstarterhere&action=display&thread=1138767558 )) |
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Post by Nyaa-Neko on Mar 14, 2007 17:14:36 GMT -5
((Um...thanks? If you are going to post an out-of-character comment, please put some indication. A lot of people use parentheses or double-parentheses. Also...this is an RP...if you can't think of what to say, say you're suffering from writer's block. Or something. We usually don't like purely-chat posts in RP topics...))
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Post by Nyaa-Neko on Mar 14, 2007 17:22:43 GMT -5
((STOP SPAMMING THE BOARDS!
IF YOU DO SOMETHING ELSE LIKE WHAT YOU'VE BEEN DOING, I'M GIVING YOU A WARNING LEVEL!
I can't believe how many rules I have to add today...
Edit: I deleted two of your posts because they were spam. Stop spamming our boards. One more rule-breaking instance from you will give you a warning level. Don't expect your Jenta journey to be easy, or for you to get a whole lot of Pokemon you want unless you SERIOUSLY get your act together.
READ THE RULES THREAD RIGHT NOW!))
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Post by Bloom Sapphire on Mar 15, 2007 17:21:36 GMT -5
she was anxious+exited. "ooh!this is so exciting!
i wonder what I'll get!
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Post by Nyaa-Neko on Mar 15, 2007 20:27:17 GMT -5
((Please use correct English.))
The professor gave her an odd look. What was she doing? Did she honestly think he'd choose what she wanted for her?
"Well? Have you made up your mind yet, girl?" He asked in a gruff voice. "If you were smart enough to find the lab, you're smart enough to make a decision on your Group 1 starter."
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Post by Bloom Sapphire on Mar 16, 2007 14:36:29 GMT -5
electrike please!she said.she is wanting a pokemon that is fast.
"i hope i get it!
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Post by Bloom Sapphire on Mar 16, 2007 19:07:51 GMT -5
hello!
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Post by Nyaa-Neko on Mar 16, 2007 19:20:26 GMT -5
((Don't spam your own thread. I SEE IT. Did you even READ the rules?
No, wait, you couldn't have. Your signature is breaking them. READ THEM RIGHT NOW! I refuse to mod this thread until you do.))
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Post by Bloom Sapphire on Mar 16, 2007 19:28:59 GMT -5
i did.
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Post by MorriganFearn on Mar 16, 2007 20:05:32 GMT -5
Please make a REAL post, not spam. At least 3 sentences, with proper English, and this includes capitalization. If you can't follow these simple rules this thread will almost certainly be deleted, and you will have to start over. There is no reason why we should waste our valuable mod time on poorly written, boring posts. If you continue to plead for mod assistance without following the rules you'll have to look to someone other than me, and please note that I currently am the only mod willing to mod for you at the moment.
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Post by Bloom Sapphire on Mar 16, 2007 20:11:01 GMT -5
I wonder what awaits me? As soon as i get my pokemon,i'm off. I hope i get it soon.
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Post by Bloom Sapphire on Mar 16, 2007 20:21:40 GMT -5
hello! peoples!hjello!
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Post by Bloom Sapphire on Mar 16, 2007 20:28:06 GMT -5
hello!!!!!hello!!!!!!!hello!
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Post by Nyaa-Neko on Mar 16, 2007 20:30:07 GMT -5
((You obviously didn't RETAIN the rules you say you read. I'm not modding this thread. Spamming it by bumping it with "hello!" won't make me want to.
This: "I wonder what awaits me? As soon as i get my pokemon,i'm off. I hope i get it soon" is not a correct post. Did you even READ what I posted? Don't you know to capitalize "I" even if it isn't the first letter in a sentence? Don't you know that everything is in third person, like how your English teacher tells you to write stories? This is like writing a story! Read my posts! Follow the example! Why do you THINK you aren't getting your Pokemon?
You are one step away from getting a higher warning level. If you really don't understand why we're yelling at you, PM me. You can do that by clicking on my name, and then clicking "send a private message".))
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Post by MorriganFearn on Mar 16, 2007 20:37:10 GMT -5
Actually, she's violated the rules so often that banning would be permissible, under Skitty's system. There are over 5 offenses in just this lab post.
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Post by Nyaa-Neko on Mar 16, 2007 20:50:01 GMT -5
((For some reason, I'm feeling forgiving today. Not sure why, after all that's happening, but I'd like to give Diana at least one more chance.))
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Post by Bloom Sapphire on Mar 17, 2007 10:11:07 GMT -5
i remember the rules. well,back to the rp."electrike please!"she said. I will be leaving soon~!
i can't wait!{jumps up+down}.i hope so!
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Post by MorriganFearn on Mar 17, 2007 10:45:06 GMT -5
Diana/Bloom, these are the rules that you have violated in your most recent post. Why is it so hard for you to follow the rules which everyone else manages to do without your repeated mistakes, especially after we tell you how to fix your posts.
Your post:
""electrike please!"she said. I will be leaving soon~!
i can't wait!{jumps up+down}.i hope so!"
is an example of exactly what we don't want. When your character does something they actually carry out the action, rather than putting it in brackets.
Your post, while it technically does have three sentences, is not well written enough to qualify. You have sentences, yes, but they are fragmented and choppy. When She is thinking you don't indicate thought with a tilda (~), you indicate thought by either using italics, or saying something like:
I will be leaving soon! I can't wait, she thought.
Beyond that, your final sentence "i hope so!" makes no sense in the context of your post. It looks as if you just inserted it to meet the three sentence minimum requirements.
Finally:
Your post was not literate. It was not even ledgible. You forgot to use capitalization, punctuation, and most embarassing of all, you did not seem to understand that there must be a space between periods and the next mark. The space bar is the long button at the bottom of your key board, and the "enter" or "return" key is no subsititue for it.
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Post by Bloom Sapphire on Mar 25, 2007 10:05:59 GMT -5
Diana taps her foot impatiently. Ahem,she said. Hello! Wheres my starter Pokemon!
Hello!are you paying attention? I want an Electric! ........!i'm so mad! can i just go catch my starter?if not Can i have my Electric! Still taps foot impatiently.
ooc:Thanks for changeing my siggi.i love the houndoom.
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